[Atto-pathfinder] Fw: towarultra

[Maciej Lewenstein]

i akso got comments from Marcelo a,d am including them now
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From: Marcelo CIAPPINA <marcelo.ciappina at gtiit.edu.cn>
Sent: Thursday, May 7, 2026 11:45 PM
To: Maciej Lewenstein <maciej.lewenstein at icfo.eu>; jriveradean <physics.jriveradean at proton.me>
Subject: Re: towarultra

Dear Maciej,
I read the proposal and it looks very strong. Attached you will find it with very minor corrections (mainly typos). They are in red.
Just one observation. In the table of page 11 (the WPs) your name is not included (and also Misha), but later in the work package description both of you are listed. I don¡¯t know if this is on purpose or a mistake. If the former, just discard my comment. Otherwise, have a look at it.
I wish you all the success!!!!
All the best,
Marcelo



Prof DSc Dr Marcelo Ciappina
Full Professor
Physics Program
Tel: +86 0754 88077152
Guangdong Technion Israel Institute of Technology
241 Daxue Road, Shantou, 515063, China

From: Maciej Lewenstein <maciej.lewenstein at icfo.eu>
Date: Thursday, May 7, 2026 at 22:30
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Subject: Re: towarultra


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molte gracies. I will work on it tonight
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Hi Maciej,

I did a first quick read and attached are some (extremely) minor suggestions (typos and changes that could possibly reduce the number of pages.). I think the proposal reads really well.

All the best!

Cheers,
Javier

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El jueves, 7 de mayo de 2026 a las 13:54, Marcelo CIAPPINA <marcelo.ciappina at gtiit.edu.cn> escribi¨®:
Thanks, Maciej.
I¡¯ll have a look during the weekend and send you my comments/suggestions.
Fingers are crossed!!!
All the best,
Marcelo



Prof DSc Dr Marcelo Ciappina
Full Professor
Physics Program
Tel: +86 0754 88077152
Guangdong Technion Israel Institute of Technology
241 Daxue Road, Shantou, 515063, China

From: Maciej Lewenstein <maciej.lewenstein at icfo.eu>
Date: Thursday, May 7, 2026 at 19:12
To: jriveradean <physics.jriveradean at proton.me>
Cc: Marcelo CIAPPINA <marcelo.ciappina at gtiit.edu.cn>
Subject: towarultra


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we have nearly everything. Now shortening to 22 pages. PLease if you can read and comment, but do not suggest any expansions ¨D shortenings or relacements

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