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The AI program CLAUDE did a reasonable job.</div>
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Thanks to Claude, Paris and Misha we have now a little more than 23 pages.</div>
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BUT!!!</div>
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we need urgent expansion of work package descriprion from Misha/Olga and Jens!!!</div>
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We need massive help from Projects and KTT to amswe red parts (like innovation, etc.)</div>
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We need GANTTand PERT charts asap.</div>
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Only then we can attempt final shortening!!!!!!!!!</div>
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The Form B is quasi ready: for your inputs!!! <br>
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In green I mark changes to aswer questions of Judith, pau and Commission. For me they are “done” </div>
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In red mark things to be done, expanded, etc. In the following I will address them directly </div>
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We are far too long start optimizing space, redesigning tables, and simply shortening radically!!! </div>
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p. 1 DONE, TO BE SHORTEN </div>
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p. 2 DONE, TO BE SHORTEN </div>
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p.3 – p.5 DONE, TO BE SHORTEN </div>
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p.6 – p.9 DONE, TO BE SHORTEN </div>
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p. 10 Projects and KTT help on GENDER DIMENSION, but all partners contribute </div>
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p. 10 Projects and KTT help on OPEN SCIENCE, but all partners contribute<span style="font-weight: 400;"> </span> </div>
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p. 10 Projects and KTT help on <b>DATA MANAGEMENENT ETC.</b>, but all partners contribute </div>
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p. 10 Kilian add the name of thecmpany </div>
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p. 10 TO BE SHORTEN </div>
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p. 11 All partners list repositories used </div>
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P. 11 All Partners, fill the table 1.3 <br>
p. 12 All partners add to interdisciplinarity </div>
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p. 11 -p. 12 TO BE SHORTEN </div>
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p. 13 Projects, KTT, all partners help with Innovati0n Material </div>
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p. 14 define Fig. X. Improve the figure </div>
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p. 14 Comms. Should write this part </div>
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p. 15 part for communications, open access, dissemisation Projects and KTT and others HELP </div>
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p.15 Pau make GANTT or send me. Anyone has an IDEA for PERT? </div>
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p. 15 allocation of resources (comprising person-months and other cost items) to work packages and consortium members? I NEED TO KNOW HOW DO WE FINANCE PRESONEL? Projects and KTT and others and partners help!!! </div>
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p. 16 redesign to shorten? </div>
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p. 17 References missing </div>
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p. 18 Refernces missing. Paris, deliverables should have one month of delivery (you put originally two) </div>
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p. 19 Misha Olga expand description, if you need my help, let me know asap </div>
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p. 20 – p. 21 Jens Maciek expand the description </div>
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p. 21 Projects Judith Pau work on WP7 please </div>
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p. 22 Explain D6.3 (M6, updated in 48???) </div>
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p. 24 Add risks ALL PARTNERS </div>
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p. 25 Fill stuff effort EVERYBODY </div>
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p. 26 – p. 29 TO BE SHORTEN. Kilian must add here!!! </div>
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p. 30 Reference I delete the titles </div>
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